tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-846662686918806948.post7798925855133275830..comments2014-09-08T15:43:49.644-05:00Comments on Writing the Next Chapter: You-know-who is in the details.Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04940404408750732890noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-846662686918806948.post-51994135071198617852014-04-28T15:20:13.576-05:002014-04-28T15:20:13.576-05:00Hello Mr.Honsinger, this comment is irrelevant to ...Hello Mr.Honsinger, this comment is irrelevant to the blog you have posted. I am a 17 year old young man who is aspiring to join the Air Force or Navy. I am mostly interested in the intelligence and linguist field. I have never had the privilege of speaking to a man who has worked in that career field and am seeking true, unbiased assistance. It would be an honor for me to speak with you a littleAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02730491573401264955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-846662686918806948.post-29638329699106018442014-04-28T14:54:54.826-05:002014-04-28T14:54:54.826-05:00Anonymous,
Thank you for commenting.
That said, m...Anonymous,<br />Thank you for commenting. <br />That said, my first sentence is not a comma splice. I have used two coordinating conjunctions to create a flow. It's a style choice, and one that reflects my speaking style. Some people may not care for it, as it is a casual, informal style, but it's by no means an error. Had I written, "That was a nice weekend, it's time to go to Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04940404408750732890noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-846662686918806948.post-42047556647244215852014-04-28T14:08:41.856-05:002014-04-28T14:08:41.856-05:00I would recommend using concise sentences and avoi...I would recommend using concise sentences and avoiding comma splicing to improve your article. People will be scrutinizing your grammar instead of thinking about your content if you draw attention to grammar mistakes.<br /><br />The first sentence could be rewritten as "That, my friends, was a very nice weekend. Now it's Monday so it's back to the work of finding work." Your Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com